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Reviewer: EmilyofImladris Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/08/07 - 04:38 am Title: Greenwood The Great

I like the seat swaps between Elladan & Elrohir. Too bad i don't have any friends who are identical twins coz i could annoy my other friends so much with that trick. Congrats!

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/06 - 12:37 am Title: Mornenitis

really

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Date: 24/09/06 - 12:29 am Title: The Sweet Forgetfulness of Sleep

heehee

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Date: 24/09/06 - 12:22 am Title: Elrohir

Yes very good thing it wasn't Brethil

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Date: 24/09/06 - 12:14 am Title: The Enchanted River

ow. bad.

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Date: 24/09/06 - 12:06 am Title: Elladan

you have gazillions of typos

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Date: 23/09/06 - 11:50 pm Title: Messages From Home

ouch

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Date: 22/09/06 - 01:16 am Title: The Tapestry

freaky...

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Date: 22/09/06 - 01:11 am Title: Lessons Learnt?

HA

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Date: 22/09/06 - 01:07 am Title: Escape

heehee

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Date: 22/09/06 - 12:53 am Title: Spider Attack!

oh my god FREAKY!

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Date: 21/09/06 - 11:50 pm Title: A Midnight Excursion

oooh i like it must read more now

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Date: 21/09/06 - 09:44 pm Title: Ellahir or Elrodan?

Of course there's no such thing! heehee. Can't wait till they meet one!

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/09/06 - 09:31 pm Title: Greenwood The Great

I love identical twin stories!FYI-the plural of mallorn is mellyrn.

Reviewer: Seafoam Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/06 - 09:28 am Title: Greenwood The Great

Very amusing!

-Seafoam Twins

Reviewer: So Yun Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/04/06 - 12:42 am Title: Confession

This is sooo good! Please update soon jay i'm now off to read your other stories

Reviewer: Tathrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/05 - 02:19 am Title: Confession

Aw, very nice. I hope to see an update soon; I really enjoyed it. You have a great command of the characters and you're explored them and connected them very delicately. You command of the language, also, is excellent; good choice and arrangement of wording throughout. You made the elflings young but not modern, and kept the "tone" of Middle-earth even when dealing with children. Even your minor characters were more than names and had dimension to them, enough to easily appear as real people and not simply plot-fillers. Speaking of plot, it was very nicely arranged. Nothing earth-shattering or world-threatening, yet the mix of interaction, dialogue, action, and suspense worked out very well to weave a cohesive story from what could have appeared as just a series of isolate incidents. You also interjected just enouigh humor to both make it a great read and to make it fit the ages of the characters--and their mischevious natures! Very imaginative, very plausible, and very well done! I look forward to the rest eagerly!

Reviewer: Tathrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/05 - 02:06 am Title: Consequences

Hee hee hee! Elrond's closing admission was great. "If I had a choice, I would rather go to war again." *snigger* Can't wait to see what happens when the truth comes out...

Reviewer: Tathrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/05 - 01:50 am Title: Close Encounters

Last chapter's developments between the twins was interesting; I liked how you wrapped it together this time around. The encounter with the troll was priceless. I was wondering how that was going to be done, and you proved more imaginative than I'd have come up with! And now, great, we have Legolas attacked by the river. Silly elflings, didn't see that coming. You'd think that, of all people, a Mirkwood Elf would know to be careful of enchanted rivers...

Reviewer: Tathrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/05 - 01:42 am Title: The Troll Hunt

*SNICKER!*

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