Heh, I first read L.U.V.I.F.C. as L.U.V.F.I.C.
Well, that was an annoying ending. Now I shall have to read the sequel, too. Oh, well, I probably would have done anyway. I like your version of Luthien very much. All in all, a brilliant story, so keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all your reviews! I really appreciate them. I was beginning to think no one read this story! And if you like my version of Luthien...well, let's just say she turns out to be somewhat of a surprise in the sequel.
Ah, quite devious. I admit that I don't really know where this is going, although I long to find out. Not tonight, though. I need my sleep. And being the Author does give you a frightening advantage, doesn't it?
Still so good... Although, I it's bookverse Canon where the Iliad is concerned, Helen did NOT love Paris. She had kids. She wanted to go home. But thats just a tiny little quibble, nothing you need to pay attention to - the story is still going great, and I'm very intrested in seeing how this will develop.
Ah, so now our heroes finally have some protection! But will the helmets be of any use against Mary Sues? Nice, I think, that you included Denethor and Thranduil there. They get so maligned. Still progressing wonderfully.