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Title: The Singing Marchwarden Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Ah, yet another great chapter. Made me giggle out loud. Um, I don't really know what else to write... It was funny.
Date: Aug 12 2005 07:57 am [Report This]
Title: Getting Things Back to.......Normal? Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Hehehe... Yay for songfics! especially funny ones. Actually, only for funny ones... This was hillarious! But do try to avoid superfluous author's notes.
Date: Aug 12 2005 07:46 am [Report This]
Title: Legolas and Arwen Sittin' in a Tree..... Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Oh, you really hit the head on the nail (or whatever the expression is) with the Aragorn-Legolas Arwen thing. Shudder. Yes, it was frighteningly accurate. Again with the "Greenleaf" thing, though... Ah, well, no matter. Brilliant chapter.
Date: Aug 12 2005 07:37 am [Report This]
Title: Even More Newcomers Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
This is getting very interesting. Can't wait to read on. So far, I really like your take on how OOC-ness, slash and 'Sues affect the Canon spouses. One little thing - author's notes in the middle of a chapter are not such a good idea. Better to use footnotes. But it's not like you do it all the time, like some authors you come across. Anyway, I like your light-hearted, entertaining yet semi-serious style. Keep up the good work.
Date: Aug 12 2005 07:23 am [Report This]
Title: The First Outsiders Arrive Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Still going good... although we're not supposed to call lady elves "she-elves". It makes Elrond unhappy. Of course, I don't know if you've read Camilla Sandman's OFUM. If not, you should - I think you'd like it. Anyhow, another good chapter.

Author's Response: I LOVE Miss Cam's OFUM! When I first wrote this, however, I was unaware that the term 'she-elf' was decidedly disliked far and wide. I have since picked up the word 'elleth' from a author by the name of Elf Eye. But I just never bothered to go back and change this. Thanks for your review!
Date: Aug 12 2005 07:05 am [Report This]
Title: A Strange Ritual and Laughing Trees Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
Very funny! A side of Arwen we don't really get to see in the books or movies, but a believable one nontheless, siblings being what they are. I rather liked the whole ritual thing.
Date: Aug 11 2005 12:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Finding a Solution Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
This is coming along wonderfully, in my opinion. You really do write very well, and not only spelling- and grammarwise. The narrative flows (for lack of a better description), the story is easy to read and very fun.
Date: Aug 11 2005 12:12 pm [Report This]
Title: The Problem is Diagnosed Reviewer: Coffeecup Signed
The idea for the story is intresting, and the beginning is great. Your approach is quite original, even if the concept in itself isn't. You write very well. There's just one tiny little thing - Greenleaf is not Legolas' surname, it's the translation of his first name. An easy mistake to make, and one that doesn't really affect the story - just thought I'd point it out.
Date: Aug 11 2005 12:00 pm [Report This]
Title: The First Outsiders Arrive Reviewer: Celebtaur Signed
Well, okay. I suppose the idea of Eve and Anck being pals is fanfic work too?

Author's Response: Hmm, yeah I guess you're right. I always sort of figured that it was sort of like pro-wrestling, you know? When the movie goes off, everyone's all buddy-buddy. Silly, I know, but that's how I see it. I hope you continue to review. I love reviews.
Date: Feb 07 2005 10:15 am [Report This]
Title: A Strange Ritual and Laughing Trees Reviewer: Celebtaur Signed
Brilliant! I love the whole mischievious pranks and stuff! But if that's how Ro and Dan are, how was Estel in his youth? When he was with them that is.
Date: Feb 07 2005 10:05 am [Report This]
Title: Finding a Solution Reviewer: Celebtaur Signed
"The knight struggled to keep a straight face." He's not the only one! I'm also having trouble remaining quiet. - I'm sitting in library.
Date: Feb 07 2005 09:52 am [Report This]
Title: The Problem is Diagnosed Reviewer: Celebtaur Signed
This would probably come under the parody genre, so the characters are allowed to be out of character. It's quite amusing, and if I get time, I'll read more chapters. Though people have to remember what characters are really like, and not allow their minds to be warped.
Date: Feb 07 2005 09:42 am [Report This]
Title: Say What? Reviewer: Noldo Signed
Heh. The evils of slang. How glad I am that you addressed the point.


Sorry, couldn't resist.

Author's Response: I'm so ashamed. Should've responded long before now. But thank you for all your reviews. They are so appreciated.
Date: Dec 04 2004 12:27 am [Report This]
Title: To Defeat a Sue Reviewer: Noldo Signed
Ouch. Book-canon Sues terrify. Good hat Arwen got rid of it at last.
Date: Dec 03 2004 11:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Running into Major Trouble Reviewer: Noldo Signed
Elvish - those name generators pretty much randomize. I don't think these names are really right...
At least that Elf stopped singing, though.
Date: Dec 03 2004 11:28 pm [Report This]
Title: The Singing Marchwarden Reviewer: Noldo Signed
Is there any synonym for 'funny' that I haven't used yet? Because this is really, really deserving of one. :)
I especially loved Stone, Parchment, Dagger.
Date: Dec 03 2004 11:23 pm [Report This]
Title: Getting Things Back to.......Normal? Reviewer: Noldo Signed
Heh. Haldir in a 'Sound of Music' songfic is the weirdest thing I've ever heard of. Hilarious, again.
Date: Dec 03 2004 11:20 pm [Report This]
Title: Even More Newcomers Reviewer: Noldo Signed
Exceedingly amusing. I'vebeen giggling constantly for the past ten minutes. :)

A couple of nitpicks: 'Quenya', not 'Quenyan', and 'marchwarden' or 'march-warden', not 'March Warden'.

Author's Response: I wondered about the 'marchwarden' thing. I think I finally did settle on 'marchwarden'. *looks back through chapters* Yep. Although I think, occasionally, I capitalize the 'm'. Hmmm. I'll have to settle on one or the other I guess. And thanks for the clear up on 'Quenya'.
Date: Dec 03 2004 11:17 pm [Report This]
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