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this is a great story and you a lovely writter i look forward to more :)
please write more, I want to know what happens!!
Awww, that was so utterly sad.
Awww, sooo sad! *Starts crying*
This is sooo sad!
OHHH NOOO!
Awww, Legolas is being so kind to her.
Aww, so sad...
Oh, NOOO why is Haldir so suspicious?
This is so sad. I hope that she is all right.
Why would her father be so vicious? Perhaps instead of describing the minutae of your protagonist's life, you could concentrate on what would make her father act like this?
Your spelling and grammar seem to be quite good with a few typos.
Please do go on. This story is very intriguing. I'm gonna keep reading as long as you keep adding.
Author's Response: Gd coz i already have 54 chapters from fanfiction.net lol.
Kat