Haunting and beautiful and sad all at once. I pity GrÃƒÆ’Ã‚Âma, and I pity ÃƒÆ’Ã¢â‚¬Â°owyn for being haunted by him. GrÃƒÆ’Ã‚Âmais tragic, although he isn't blameless in being so. I can see the innocent, sweet game becoming a darker expression of GrÃƒÆ’Ã‚Âma's desire for ÃƒÆ’Ã¢â‚¬Â°owyn, and it is chilling. Not to mention that your prose is spectacular - I highly enjoy the way you write. I have never heard of Edelweiss or RÃƒÆ’Ã‚Â¼bezahl, but I would like to look them up now.
Author's Response: Yes, he is tragic... Thank you very much!
Ooh the irony! Such a lovely, innocent, beautiful story. Very sad in that it hints at what will come when the innocent fun fades with time and Shadow. Nicely written; I especially like the subtlety. Excellently done. I feel as though I must go read the original though, although I'm sure that I'll prefer this version. Quite beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you! *bows*