Ahhh - I see you've written some more ...
Well - this is turning out different to how I imagined - everyone seems be fanicied by one, yet fancy another - I am looking forward to seeing how you pair them all up, if indeed you do, at the end.
(One observation - you are very mean to Legolas you know! What has the poor boy done to you? *g*)
Author's Response: This was posted on another site and a reviewer there told me that they were tired of Legolas always getting the guy. So, as a favor to her, I changed things up a little. And I think that everyone will end up paired together. Or at least I hope so : D
Bah - I am a sucker for starting to read a story and getting involved and caught up in the story and then realising it DOESN'T end ... I am either going to have to start reading the little box that says "Complete: No" and pay attention, or get better at pleading with people to write the next part of their stories. Look - you write well, you have a nice grasp of the characters and you manage to integrate the reader almost immediately with some interest in what happens next ... don't tease us, and your characters like this. The story wants to be told, it shouldn't have to wait for you to get some response before writing more ... it's begging to be told, let's see what you do with it.
Author's Response: muchos apologies. I've been very busy lately and haven't been here at all in the past couple months. There's more of it written and I will post it very soon...several more chapters worth actually. sorry to upset you. : )