Reviews For Biggest Mistake
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Title: Biggest Mistake Reviewer: Daewen Signed
This is so full of longing. It's always sad when two people get separated.
Date: Oct 31 2009 01:11 pm [Report This]
Title: Biggest Mistake Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed
Where did you get the inspiration for this? It seems like a song I know of. I really like this and I look forward to reading more of your things.
Date: Oct 03 2008 08:18 am [Report This]
Title: Biggest Mistake Reviewer: Camilla Sandman Signed
Nice poem. Just a few things - tiny spelling mistake in line two as well as the summary - should be "breathe", not breath. And in the third last line it should be "for you're all I see". Nice tone and feeling to it, though.

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing out my spelling mistakes, i'm a horrible speller! I'm glad you liked it! Thanks again
Date: Dec 24 2004 03:25 pm [Report This]
Title: Biggest Mistake Reviewer: spanishgoddess86 Signed
This is beautifully written. It very sad. Good job. Sorry this review sounds chopy it late and I'm somewhat sick and just not thinking all that well right now.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you feel better. I just got over being sick a couple days ago, it's not fun.
Date: Dec 14 2004 08:46 pm [Report This]
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