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I loved this! It was really sad, but I think everyone knew that someday our favorite ranger had to go. It's really sad if you think about it that way, but if we think about the good times he had, it makes it all worth it.
*wipes away her tears* that was so beautiful and sad! The last sentence is great.
This is very sad. I always wanted Aragorn to be immortal so he wouldn't have to leave the only family his know and Legolas. However I know that can't be and he must die eventually, but it still sad none the less.
Anyway I look foward to reading Arwen's POV next. Keep up the good work.
Not a bad start and an interesting choice of scene. Spelling is good, but you might be overdoing the commas a bit. I'll be looking forward to the rest.