What an angsty and sad story... I liked the way you wrote this. Especially I love that this is a songfic! Being a songfic writer myself, I hate that people don't bother to leave feedback for those. I decided that on the next day I would go to your grave, and the day after, and the day after that, in the hope that your spirit would guide my way.
The way to trust and love again. This sentence nearly brought tears to my eyes. Anyways, I'm off to read some other stuff by you! Great story! ~ Envinyatar
Author's Response: Thank you. I love to write angst stuff, and i believe that song could add some more emotion or more use of words, power to the story, and i'm glad that you love it. Thank you for the review. Sivan Shemesh