um.... this was amazing.
my heart actually ached for them.
such a beautifully written story.
well done

Author's Response: Wow! I'm glad you thought so and that the story was able to touch you like that! Thank you for the review!

Well, i have goosebumps (the good kind)
that was so sad and beautiful

x

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing - and I'm pleased you enjoyed it! For some strange reason, I often end up writing really angsty, sad stories when I'm in a really good mood - and this was one of them...

there's only one thing i can say about this

*sniffs*

wow

Author's Response: Awww, I am glad it was able to touch you. I wrote most it when I was having an odd emotional moment, so it was kind of spontaneous.