ooh...that's really cool! Poor Arwen...very poignant and sorrowfully written. Might want to fix "and of her spouse, ÃƒÆ’Ã¢â‚¬Â°owyn," however. Unless there's something about Aragorn we don't know. ;) I like how you worked in Arwen's visions. I'm torn, though; on one hand, I think it's the perfect length and adding anything would dillute its potency. On the other, I'm jumping up and down yelling "me want more" as if I were a kid in a candy store. But I suppose that's a sign of a good short story; when your reader leaves perfectly satisfied and yet still greedy you know you have a good one.