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Reviewer: oboroyo Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/10/05 - 04:47 pm Title: Home is behind the world ahead

omg, this was so, so cute! YAY! one thing though...PARAGRAPHS. It's really, really hard to read in the format that it's in. Just break it all up, you know? Other than that, good story...a little Mary-Sue, but there's nothing wrong with that ^_~ keep writing

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