I really enjoyed this piece and can tell you have talent oozing out of every orifice! Even without a Beta, this was in excellent readable shape. My one big ass complaint is that you ruined the mood of authenticity by having Thranduil shorten Legolas' name to 'Legs' and by the really silly OFC name. It doesnt read like a Sinde name or a Sylvan one. Whatever it is supposed to mean, it sure isnt elvish! The letter 'a' denotes a NON feminine ending BTW. Such a shame, you did so well up until this area.
Author's Response: Thank you for your honest feedback adn glowing appraisial, it is much appreciated. The OFC's name is in Quenyan, and means Hidden Daughter (Muina - hidden, and Selda - Daughter), and she isn't Sindar or Sylvan, but an Avari starring in another fic I am working on...sorry for the confusion, I should probably add that in my disclaimer. The nickname 'Legs' is meant to be a term of endearment strickly between father and son during very private moments. I hope this answers any questions you had...:D - Bird
Reviews For The Elfling Chronicles