This is seriously creepy, I have never liked Grima but you have taken his creep factor to a new level. I want to say I like this but at the same time it scared the heck out of me, which is not something easily done so I must congradulate you! There were a few very small spelling mistakes here and there, nothing huge really and they certainly did not take away from the seriously dark tone of this story. I was kind of hoping for a touch more at the end but at the same time the way you ended this piece was very effective.