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Title: Chapter Forty: Putting Out Another Fire Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I don't know why but break-up/make-up chapters make me smile...not the break-up part, the make-up part...Orlando was well on the way to breaking up with Missy, yet I felt the desire for him to want to be talked out of it...Dom to the rescue! I hope this episode in their relationship only strengthens them. Marissa didn't know Orlando back then, I think he may have overreacted somewhat to her confession. And Marissa learned something too, I believe she sort of grew up in the time between the fight and the reconciliation. I am glad "everything was alright" as you said.

Author's Response: You're quite insightful, I must say; yes, I think they both learned something from this but that's going to be nothing compared to what they'll learn soon.
Date: Mar 10 2006 12:51 am [Report This]
Title: Prologue: A Lustful Wish Granted (Part 1) Reviewer: EstellaB Signed
I know I just left a review but now I remember what I wanted to say in the first place (typical)...I would love to see more of Dom and Brie in this. I know the story is more about Orlando and Marissa, but I thought that your development of the other two characters was really good and that they should definitely crop up a lot more. However, this story isn't my baby, it's yours, so do what you think's served you pretty well until now! This story is wonderful!
Date: Mar 04 2006 12:03 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine: When The Truth Hurts Reviewer: EstellaB Signed
Please write more!
Date: Mar 04 2006 11:53 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine: When The Truth Hurts Reviewer: LegolasLover87 Signed
I love love LOVE this took me a while to finish reading, but now that I've finally finished, I'm reviewing...why is Kate's Dr calling to talk to Orlando and Marissa? and just fyi, I hate Kate Bosworth lol...please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, that's an excellent question but when you're a celebrity therapist, you'll do just about anything for your clients, including "making up" with someone your client has hurt in some way. Have not worries, I'm working on the next chapter and we'll find out exactly what this all means.
Date: Mar 01 2006 08:48 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine: When The Truth Hurts Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Hope that this ominous phone call is not what I think it is! Please don't let it be Kate doing something rash like "attempting" suicide! Other than that I enjoyed this chapter, as it kind of is laying the groundwork for the eventual formal commitment between Orlando and Marissa (dare I say marriage!?)...more soon please!

Author's Response: Oh you may dare, I mean that's usually why couples get engaged, right? And as far as the phone call, I'm not ENTIRELY sure what's going on with Kate or why she needs to get therapist involved but somehow that seems a bit extreme, but then she hasn't exactly been poster child for normalcy to date has she? Hmm, what IS that call about? Guess we'll just have to wait and see.
Date: Feb 28 2006 12:51 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight: New Friends And Learning The Truth Reviewer: Pammie Signed you have me wondering if the nice Karen that Marissa met is the same "assisstant" Kate is rambling on about! The meeting with Karen and Marissa just seemed to...smooth...too bad Kate had her say, playing sweet at first then going for the jugular...right where it hurt...I can tell Marissa isn't going to let it go...I liked this very much!

Author's Response: I know, it just seems TOO convenient that Karen not only went to school with Kate, but REALLY doesn't like her either. Now whether she is the same "assistant", I'm not sure yet but I do think it would be interesting if Marissa saw what happens when you bond with someone over a common enemy.
Date: Feb 28 2006 12:44 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Resolving Some Personal Issues Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I can't wait for the showdown! I am more curious than Marissa about why Orlando feels the need to meet with Kate. I sense there is more to the meeting than just getting over pettiness and jealousies. I hope that there is a good resolution for all 3 concerned (and kudos to Marissa for sticking to her guns about a neutral meeting place). Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I think what it comes down to it, Orlando has a very hard time letting go of the past AND since Kate was his girlfriend for about 2 or 3 years, there's definitely some emotional investment there on his part, even it is only a friendship thing. I think above all, he has a hard time admitting that maybe she hasn't changed for the better and the best way to that is to see her face to face. After all, if she really responsible for the article and pictures, that would the ultimate betrayal in anyone's eyes.
Date: Feb 28 2006 12:23 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Resolving Some Personal Issues Reviewer: Myri78 Signed
sorry for the delay i really am well i had a problem with my server of internet and i changed so i have a new one thank god anyway i read ur chapter and well kate is a part of his life and it seems forever HA well girl see ya next time ok great as always
Date: Nov 28 2005 01:38 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Resolving Some Personal Issues Reviewer: obsessedlotr Signed
Kate? meeting with them? well i suppose it is neeced...but still she was a total bitch to both of them marissa the most young and immature still she went to far and i have a feeling she might very well screw with them still i don't know it will be interesting to see how it all blows over also to see how things go with reese and this new assistant of hers hope she gives marissa a little more time off of work and makes things easy on her i'll be excited to see how this works write more soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, Kate was definitely interesting to say the least; the question is, is Kate REALLY this cruel and evil or is there something more to it? Whatever the reason, I predict that it's going to take Orlando a bit to get over it. Thanks for the positive comments!
Date: Nov 25 2005 07:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Six: Damage Control Reviewer: obsessedlotr Signed
Glad to hear Johnny's view also i think his words really helped ease Orlando and god knows her needed that i wanna know how he will fix all this or if it will be fixed. And Kate that little bitch sorry but thats how i feel young emotional women or not she had no right no right at all to sell them down a river for her revenage Marissa will have to make that devil pay lucky for us Kate may be a devil but Marissa is two-devils in one i'm sure she can handle this. Better then anyone else at least i hope things don't go bad with reese in fact i hope they turn out for the best i LOVE your story update ASAP

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your lovely comments! Yeah, Johnny is the all wise guru when it comes to this kind of stuff and I think his advice definitely helped ease Orlando's mind. As for Kate, well, the problem is definitely going to be solved but not in the way that one would think. And yes, no one to handle Kate better than Marissa as we will see. More to come shortly.
Date: Nov 21 2005 07:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Five: When Tensions Run High Reviewer: obsessedlotr Signed
a fight eh? well unfortunately in fights we all say things we don't mean doesn't look like marissa and orlando are any different yes the man may look like a god...but he is in fact human although i think it should be a crime to look that good all the time brown hair blond hair whatever it should be a crime non the less a crime of sexiness ooo a thought of orlando in handcuffs tempting thought :D anyways things are seeming to go from bad to worse but i guess you gotta hit the bottom before you hit the top so i'm sure things will be good again tough chapter to read but your paparazzi stories weren't far off they are everywhere and they are like cockroaches you can't kill them they keep coming back!a baby to look after to well it doesn't sound fun now but who knows orlando and marissa might ha ve fun playing parents with a real baby and just not lilly and sidi speaking of those to i bet they are lonely without mummy and daddy lilly probly grew alot o well i'm sure the "family" will be back together soon keep up to good work

Author's Response: Hmmm, Orlando in handcuffs, I may have to think on that one for a bit... hehehe. Anyway, yes, the man may look good but he is still human as he so correctly proved. And I think Sidi and Lili will be very happy to see mommy and daddy again but I imagine Sidi's found ways to occupy himself until then. More will come.
Date: Nov 04 2005 10:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Five: When Tensions Run High Reviewer: Myri78 Signed
ha nice fight uh? HA well i think taking care of a baby maybe wake up that little thing all men have when they have a baby in his arms at first they think they are complications and resposabilitis but i think Orlnado will want to have a docen of them after taking care of this little girl

Author's Response: Yeah, Orlando may be looking at it with complete objectivity now but when they're taking care of Reese, I imagine he'll feel differently and I'm sure that'll make that whole transition easier on everyone.
Date: Nov 04 2005 01:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Four: Meet The Parents From Hell Reviewer: obsessedlotr Signed
Cheats! They think he cheated on her. I hope they can settle things out. Marissa caused no trouble if anyone was causing trouble it was Kate. Marissa must look like a home wrecker to the public! Oh how awful and at such a bad time too. Her family has basically sunk to the lowest level they have no respect or love for her. She must feel orphan. Well besides Orlando of course. But still e very girl needs a home i can't imagine going through life with 2 realitives who loved you,died and the only other realatives be total bitches pardon me for saying it but its the truth! Brie her and Dom i'm not sure what they are up to but they seem happy and if Marissa had any other family other than Orlando it would be Brie and she isn't even there to confort her. And poor Orlando having to find out just how awful her family is no one should have to go through that! Any who i liked your update post more soon

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely comment! Yeah, it sucks that Orlando had to see them for what they really were but it will come to pass that she's better of without her family. And it's no fault of Brie's that she wasn't there, she had her own grief to deal with helping her brother through his loss and all. And yes, the whole paparazzi thing is just one more headache but HOPEFULLY it'll spark some dialogue about the REAL paparazzi problem; I'm afraid to admit this but my "story" about the ways of the paparazzi will not be very far from the truth, in fact it may be giving them too much credit.
Date: Oct 27 2005 04:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Four: Meet The Parents From Hell Reviewer: Myri78 Signed
why i think i have an idea of who was guilty about that pics is a she and her name begins with K well if it is true i have to work like a clarvoyant anyway love ur storya dn hope to read more soon

Author's Response: Hmmm, she WOULD have very good reason to want to set them up like that considering I don't think Orlando's on her nice list and Marissa DEFINITELY isn't. But the question is, would she stoop that low? Only one way to know; you'll have to read to find out. Thanks for the comment and there will be more to come.
Date: Oct 27 2005 09:41 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Four: Meet The Parents From Hell Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Excellent chapter! I am glad that Marissa is thru with her family, and that she doesn't have to deal with them any more. I guess it's a blessing in disguise, cos now she has more headaches, literally. Here's hoping she can get past the rag photos and just lay low for awhile til the worst is past. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! Laying low is definitely going to be something they'll have to do for a while but not before getting to the bottom of the story... Should be interesting who's to blame for the photos and story. More to come shortly!
Date: Oct 26 2005 07:42 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Three: Revisiting Old Feelings, Good And Bad Reviewer: obsessedlotr Signed
Glad you got around to updating ; ) its been hetic for me i can only imagine you are just if not more as busy It looks like marissa got her prince charming What we all wouldn't give to have a prince charming like Orlando of our own *fantasize* anyways I want to know what happens when he well they meet her family its seems a very long time since marissa talked to them and it seems she doesn't want to get reaquented but instead to get it over with quick well all the same i want to see what happens and if her parents have any ideal of what shes been up too i wonder if they saw that magazine although you couldn't see her face you never know i bet they sure would be suprised to know what a "naughty"boy Orlando has been with her hee hee i oved your update as usual ( don't be fooled by that last statement ) update soon as you have time i love it !

Author's Response: Oh yes, Orlando's been a VERY naughty boy, but hey, that's how we like him right? Anyways, it seems the story has been built up to this point, in a way, and while her parents would never know that picture in the magazine was her, there's no telling what other magazines have said about the two of them and if her parents have seen said magazines or not. Hmmm, wonder where that's going to take this...
Date: Oct 13 2005 05:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Three: Revisiting Old Feelings, Good And Bad Reviewer: Myri78 Signed
nice really as aways but why u took so long haha well i know i have a job now and i know what it is not having time for anything so hope u update soon adn what will happend when ehr parents meet orlando and viceversa, well at least we know orlando loves her and he will be there for her wont he? we´ll see

Author's Response: Yeah, I've been kinda busy with a lot of stuff so it's been interesting finding time to write but I'll really try to make the updates more frequent. And as for what will happen when Orlando meets her parents? Well, we'll just have to find out.
Date: Oct 12 2005 11:21 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Two: Sometimes The Best Kind Of Therapy Is Love Reviewer: QueenNikki Signed
aww! what a perfect scene! i wish me and my ex bf were together again... we still love each other... but we're with someone else... but my bf just broke up with me to go out with a blockhead... hah, blockhead... go to my xanga site to find out more... anywho, good story!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate the positive comments. I'll be sure to have more soon.
Date: Sep 01 2005 03:57 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Two: Sometimes The Best Kind Of Therapy Is Love Reviewer: obsessedlotr Signed
poor marissa sounds terrible what happened to her but good ole orlando knows just what to do amazing how her grandma and cousin ties in with there love i suppose its there fate anyways i love the way the story is going with love and loss i wonder what bre thought when she heard speaking of bre haven't seen her or dom for awhile wonder what those 2 r up too

Author's Response: Oh I imagine they're up to plenty of trouble; and we will soon see how she is handling this seeing as how she and her sister-in-law were quite close. Thanks for the wonderful feedback and I will have more.
Date: Aug 16 2005 07:48 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty-Two: Sometimes The Best Kind Of Therapy Is Love Reviewer: Myri78 Signed
hello girl owww so loving and pure i love ur story adn i hope to read mmore about it i just come back from a mini trip to mendoza is a place in my country where u can see the highest mountain in america, the aconcawa and i knew the snow buz i've never been there love to hear about u girl adn hope to see ya soon

Author's Response: Thanks for the positive feedback! I'm glad you like where this is going, just wait 'til you see what comes next!
Date: Aug 16 2005 11:07 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Thirty: Taking Everything Life Has To Offer; The Good And The Bad Reviewer: QueenNikki Signed
omg! what happened?!?!

Author's Response: Ahh, you will see, you will see; no fun in me telling you what happens now is there? Will have more very shortly.
Date: Aug 11 2005 08:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Sometimes Exes Are Like Cockroaches Reviewer: QueenNikki Signed
i wish i could see that look lol

Author's Response: Oh yeah, I'd like to see it myself but... Oh well, only in our dreams I'd imagine
Date: Aug 07 2005 03:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter Twenty-Seven: The Hardest Thing To Do Reviewer: Myri78 Signed
oh my godd so sweet well at least he made the right desition and my special and romantic night is coming on the way hehehehe thanks for another wonderfull chapter i want to read my brithday present
Date: Jun 23 2005 11:20 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter Twenty-Six: Rumors, Rumors Everywhere; Is The Truth In Sight? Reviewer: QueenNikki Signed
aw man i'd strangled kate if i were the girls. you aint gonna mess with my friends and get away with it.. what's kate doing? what's gotten into marissa's mind? why did she let him leave? kate needs to back off.. orlando better not be stupid enough to fall for her tricks.. man im fired up again.. cant wait til the next chapter.. keep writing ^_^

Author's Response: Ahh that's the spirit, call it a trust issue, which is a big step for Marissa to say the least; she knows that Orlando loves her and she's just trusting that if she lets him go, he'll come back. And what IS Kate up to? Well, we'll just have to see. More on the way!
Date: Jun 21 2005 06:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Prologue: A Lustful Wish Granted (Part 1) Reviewer: legos_r_hot Signed
Srry I'm not oging for the whole OMG it's landothing I admit if I saw him I would actl ike that insideto but what your girrl os 4 gettin is that he just happens to be a person to so srry the story doesn't turn me on!

Author's Response: That's cool, I can respect that and really that;s not what it is either. It's a story, totally fictional and an excerise in creativity and imagination, nothing more. I don't know how far you've read but I think you'll find that she knows that he's a person just like everyone else. I also think that every fan is allowed a moment of weakness.
Date: Jun 21 2005 04:04 pm [Report This]
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