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Reviewer: Narya Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/01/09 - 07:06 pm Title: Hope Fades

Oops, I accidentally knocked the mouse before I'd finished typing and it clicked on "Submit."

Anyway, what I was going to say was, AU's can be great fun to read as long as they're properly thought through, and by the sounds of things, yours would be. I'd be interested to see what happens.

Happy writing!

Reviewer: Narya Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/01/09 - 07:04 pm Title: Hope Fades

Hi Melanye...I stumbled across your story whilst nosying in other people's Favourites, and was surprised to see it hadn't got a review yet, so I thought I'd leave you some feedback.

You've set up the action very well - no messing about, straight into the story. Excellent. I also think you did a good job evoking the panic that would have gripped the elves at such a time, and you leave the chapter on a lovely juicy cliffhanger.

Has this story been abandoned? I know a lot of people get irritated with this kind of story - female members of the Fellowship, OC romances with canon characters etc. - but this has the potential to bring something a little different to the table, as long as you're careful not to let Laileth turn into a Mary-Sue. If you have given up on it, it might be worth giving it another shot. AU's can be great fun to read

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