ouch those poor men when will this story come to an end when it does end how are they ever going to be the same with another women
Author's Response: LOL! Well we have written through chapter 12 so far, and are attempting to write chapter 13. They will forever be tainted however. LOL!
you continue to amaze lovely piece of work it seems that they'll never get out of trin and rhondas clutches.i hope you do post more soon.also i like the glazed donut look it's a nice desriptive phrase.
Author's Response: Thanks! There will more more descriptive words to come. I will updating again Thursday morning early. :D
hey if you wrote to chapter 12 why aren't you posting any if your waiting for more people to read you story don't it only count if at least one person likes you story if you can manage that your doing pretty we'll for ya self. and here i am at your service i'll let you know my thoughts on your story cause uhh well i guess you can call me a fan so post more soon
Author's Response: LOL I only get to come online at night, so I post as I get to. I will be posting the next chapter tonight, and thanks! I am glad you like it
well that was interesting i hope you right more its hard to expect something in this story and i like that
Author's Response: Yes the unexpected will happen in this parody. You will be shocked, and possibly choke at some of the songs Billy will sing later on.
ha i loved your story it was hilarious yet oh what the word...occword(not sure how to spell)i loved it though poor orli and viggo my heart went out to them on this one.hope you write more soon
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the review and yes we have written through to chapter 12 so far. I will post the next chapter tomorrow.