I really liked the idea. I loved the way Boromir reflected on his life, I can imagine him thinking like that.
My one criticism is that I think you shortened the battle to the point where it seemed insignificant. It was as though Boromir was completely off in his own world, and didn't really care about his surroundings. I think he would have been a little more involved than that. Aside from that it was really good, well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. It has been a long time since I wrote this, but I think the plan was to use just Boromir's thoughts, and nothing else, not the hobbits or anything. I am glad you enjoyed reading the fic though, and thanks! for the review