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Date: 06/06/06 - 06:17 pm Title: Faramir

WHy? Why must people torment Faramir? HE'S A GOOD GUY!

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Date: 06/06/06 - 06:09 pm Title: Upon the Edge of Ruin

1. okay, where is the Ring! Did he SWALLOW it!
2. I HAD a hankerchief, but I ATE it, I'm so tense!
3. Yeah Faramir!

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Date: 06/06/06 - 05:57 pm Title: Black Gate-Bound

The bandage around frodo's arm is a dead give-away. It should end at "nothing."

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Date: 06/06/06 - 05:49 pm Title: Through the Wastelands

1. Wouldn't Shire FEET be BIGGER? ;)
2. How did they get out of the rocks!?
3. Orcs wouldn't be wandering around the Dead marshes!
4. Why doesn't Frodo use his glass?
5. There is no possible way that they could find their out.

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Date: 03/06/06 - 04:22 am Title: They Also Serve Who Stand And Wait

Is Gandulf truely gone?
What of the Duinidain from the north?

Author's Response: Patience - other chapters will answer those questions. Thanks for reading, and for commenting! Dwim

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Date: 03/06/06 - 03:59 am Title: Dust to Dust

Aii! Not...Gimli...! aaaiii!

Author's Response: Handkerchief? Dwim

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Date: 03/06/06 - 03:45 am Title: Cast the Net Round

Where are Frodo and Sam?

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Date: 03/06/06 - 03:30 am Title: And All the King's Men

Aiii! You have me on the edge!

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Date: 03/06/06 - 03:17 am Title: All the King's Horses

Well, this is getting more and more distressing!

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Date: 03/06/06 - 03:03 am Title: Dram of Evil

Why would Legolas and Eomer be in the same cell?


Nooo! Let not Eowyn...!

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Date: 03/06/06 - 02:44 am Title: House of Glass

I like this insight to Eomer's captivity, and the reactions of the rest of Edoras.

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Date: 02/06/06 - 04:58 am Title: Perplexities

How soon will Gandlf make his apperence?
Theoden does not seem as ill in this.

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Date: 02/06/06 - 04:43 am Title: The Forest for the Trees

The bit of dwarvish is quite nice.

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Date: 02/06/06 - 04:35 am Title: Encounters

What is Legolas doing?!

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Date: 01/06/06 - 11:22 pm Title: Hunters in Rohan

Legolas and Gimli should run side by side.

Gimli's insight to Legolas is almost human.

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Date: 01/06/06 - 11:09 pm Title: The Road Goes Ever On

The way you fallow canon as closely as possible is good to me.

Author's Response: Thanks, Wyn. I'm glad you've been enjoying the story; I appreciate hearing from you. Dwim

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Date: 01/06/06 - 10:57 pm Title: Shrive Me Graceless on My Path

How could Aragorn embrace Boromir when he si full of arrows?

Author's Response: You're imagining them in a facing embrace. That's not the position they're in. If you want my visual cue for this, I can send you the picture if you contact me by e-mail. Dwim

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Date: 01/06/06 - 10:44 pm Title: Riven

Boromir.

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Date: 01/06/06 - 10:11 pm Title: Adrift

You shift between deepening dispair and tantilizing hope.

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Date: 01/06/06 - 10:02 pm Title: Leaving Lothlórien

You're a good writer, able to combine many plot lines.

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