This was really wonderful! I've read a lot of 'End of the World' type stories, but this one was so detailed and so attentive to the little things. But I was wondering: Why did you leave out Aragorn and Arwen's son? I can't remember his name (begins with an E, I know that much), but he was definitely there. It worked well, but it would have been nice to see him at least mentioned.
eeep. This was amazing... chilling, frightening, saddening...but amazing. And it is fairly late at night here. I love how I always pick this sort of thing right before bed. Really just wow. The end of days is not an easy thing to tackle in writing. Bravo! Great work. I loved this. I am scared out of my mind now, but it's worth it. Rock on! ~Azaelia