The end of this chapter is so cute! I can just imagine the way Glorfindel's being a bit of a limp rag as Karyn's trying to get him into her bed. But he's got to be enjoying every second of it. :D Also, I really like how you're having their relationship progress at a more natural rate, instead of 'Hi. Wanna fuck?' like you tend to see with a lot of fics containing original characters.
i really am enjoying this story. The characters are well written and the humor is terrific. i await your next chapter with antisapation.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. That is greatly appreciated.