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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Princess Kalen Signed
Date: Apr 09 2006 03:16 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Excellent imagery! I look forward to the tent at last!
Date: Feb 03 2006 12:50 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 15 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I am glad that Achilles continues to take an interest in Paris, I just wonder if all her intentions are noble (lol!)...thanks for continuing a great story!
Date: Feb 03 2006 12:44 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
This was so very descriptive and made me feel the tension, anger and desire acutely! (cold shower time!) I like that each of these characters fight for domination of the situation, Paris wants to forget certain aspects of what happened (or almost did) to him and Achilles for trying to right the wrong done to him. They both are used to getting their way, and being in complete control of their destiny. (Paris is more of a let-the-chips-fall kind of guy) But being royalty Paris had been indulged, and I imagine he's in shock at this point to the extremes he's seeing in Achilles. Also how she stirs him! I liked this chapter a lot!

Author's Response: OMG! Thanks so much. I love it when reviews like this are actually detailed. Although I like it too when people just tell me whether they do or don't like what I'm doing, it's great to actually know what it is that people are getting from what I do. Thanks a whole lot!
Date: Feb 03 2006 12:38 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 18 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
ahh...I had no doubt your Paris was going to be as skilled in his "department" as Achilles is in hers! Now we all have to wait breathlessly for chapter 19! Hurry! :-)
Date: Feb 03 2006 12:20 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 18 Reviewer: HHS Signed
Argh!You stopped right there!?Hurry!
Date: Feb 01 2006 08:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 17 Reviewer: HHS Signed
The way you incorporated Paris line for Achilles instead of Helen(stitching of his skin)was amazing.
Date: Feb 01 2006 08:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 16 Reviewer: HHS Signed
Whew!That was close!
Date: Feb 01 2006 08:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 15 Reviewer: HHS Signed
Everytime I see that scene of Paris on the ground,what a wuss!
Date: Feb 01 2006 07:57 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I don't know what advice I'd give you, cos you seem to be doing fine on your own. All of this is of course leading up to the Achilles/Paris encounter, so I hope you don't leave us hanging now! :-O You have lots of room to do your own thing at this point, cos it's the part of the story that you will create. I am looking for maybe a big conflict between Achilles and Agamemnon regarding the treatment of Paris, leading up to the part where she rescues him from the soldier's having sport with him, and takes him to her tent. Other than that, I think you are doing super on your story, I for one am enjoying it immensely. Pam
Date: Nov 15 2005 09:03 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14 Reviewer: HHS Signed
He got captured again!?Worse for Paris now when Agamemnon gets his revenge.
Date: Nov 14 2005 01:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: HHS Signed
Everytime I see that scene,why does he have to be a sissy boy?

Author's Response: Well, would you honestly just sit there and let some fat sone of a bitch cut your head off? I sure as hell wouldn't! :)
Date: Nov 14 2005 01:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12 Reviewer: HHS Signed
Idiot!Menelaus might be old but he's an experienced warrior.Paris is weak from his captivity.
Date: Nov 10 2005 06:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
Happy to have you back AND 2 chapters to read! I really really really! like Achilles as a woman, it's just rich how your perspective changes when the character you watched on the screen is now a female. But you capture the essence of the film version very well, and I am anxiously awaiting the next couple of chapters, I am assuming the reunion of Achilles and Paris in her tent on the beach! (YAY!) More please!
Date: Nov 10 2005 12:53 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 Reviewer: Pammie Signed
I am loving the perspective of this story with Achilles as a woman...I just saw "Troy" again last nite on TV, so I was elated there were a couple more chapters to read today. I think you are very skillful in your storytelling, that you use the dialogue from the movie and tweak it for this tale. I, for one, can't think of a thing to tell you to improve. This is good as is! Thanks for a great read!
Date: Oct 09 2005 03:37 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 Reviewer: HHS Signed
How about showing what kind of relationship Achilles had with her mother?
Date: Oct 08 2005 07:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10 Reviewer: HHS Signed
You know what I thought when I saw that part,he was a sissy boy.
Date: Oct 08 2005 07:25 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 Reviewer: HHS Signed
No it's not over the top.I like the way he acted(sort of).
Date: Sep 02 2005 02:57 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 Reviewer: HHS Signed
Yes an update!
Date: Sep 02 2005 02:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: HHS Signed
Very interesting indeed!Enough for me wanting more.
Date: Aug 10 2005 12:53 pm [Report This]
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