Good story! out of interest which one does Ebony actually like Elijah or Dom
Author's Response: well you will find out as the story progresses. I'm sorry i haven't updated but i have been having some personal problems that have kept me from writing.
Oh no, it's perfectly fine if you want reviews! I am actually rather demanding when it comes to reviews (I have another account on ff.net), and it's perfectly reasonable if you would like some as well. I myself make sure to review almost every story I sift through. =D So far, I think your story's pretty cool, and it almost looks like you *do* know them. And, not to be demanding or anything, but is there going to be a plot or something for this? Like is something gonna happen? Or is it just for fun? Just askin' I don't care either way. I think you should keep going! ~Dragonlore
hey gurlie good chap. its about time i was put in there even if it was for only like 2 seconds. keep goin with this i wanna see what happnes at the mall.
Author's Response: it'll be a blast at the mall. Just wait and see.