Hello Eamane, When I spotted your name, the same as mine- I was immediately drawn to your story! (smile) I think it is darned good-but by far... much too short. I was just getting into it and the chapter was over! (smile) Love the title too, given who the character is.. very clever. (smile) I think you should continue. This story has much potential. I definitely want to read more! Have a hreat weekend... Eamane Aldarion