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Reviewer: Delsinoria Greenleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/06 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

this story is unlike any one i have ever read. How did you come yp with this? This story is great all though i do not like the facy that Orlando's character had to face such but i will get over myself. Good job.

Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/05 - 11:34 am Title: Chapter 2

Ok, this is the second time I've read this story and I still want to know what happens! :) I really like it. It seems strange that I like reading about something so... nasty. But you're writing it really well and it really makes me feel sorry for Paris. So I'd love you forever if you posted more!Lol. :) Pleeease?

Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/05 - 08:41 am Title: Chapter 2

Yet another spectacular chapter. I say again, poor Paris!Lol. What's the girl's story then? It sounds like she has done this kind of thing a lot. Is she nice or nasty? I'm looking forward to the next one. Keep'em coming (pardon the expression.lol)

Reviewer: Nevasaiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/05 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

OH MY GOD! How can you be so mean?!Lol. Poor Paris! What more can they possibly do to him?! Please tell me he's going to get out of there eventually! I need to know what happens so you have to write more! I feel so sorry for him I almost want to cry! In case you don't get it already, I really like this. You write it really well and your torture ideas are very... imaginative! I never would've come up with the bees. Keep up the good work! :)

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