this story is unlike any one i have ever read. How did you come yp with this? This story is great all though i do not like the facy that Orlando's character had to face such but i will get over myself. Good job.
Ok, this is the second time I've read this story and I still want to know what happens! :) I really like it. It seems strange that I like reading about something so... nasty. But you're writing it really well and it really makes me feel sorry for Paris. So I'd love you forever if you posted more!Lol. :) Pleeease?
Yet another spectacular chapter. I say again, poor Paris!Lol. What's the girl's story then? It sounds like she has done this kind of thing a lot. Is she nice or nasty? I'm looking forward to the next one. Keep'em coming (pardon the expression.lol)
OH MY GOD! How can you be so mean?!Lol. Poor Paris! What more can they possibly do to him?! Please tell me he's going to get out of there eventually! I need to know what happens so you have to write more! I feel so sorry for him I almost want to cry! In case you don't get it already, I really like this. You write it really well and your torture ideas are very... imaginative! I never would've come up with the bees. Keep up the good work! :)