Very good, Courtney. Great use of emotion and excitement. It could have been a little longer, and a tad bit more structured (don't hate me for saying it), but overall I can't wait to hear what's going to happen next! So far you're keeping me on the edge of my seat. Keep up the good work!
So far this is a good story. Cortney I never knew you had it in you!? lol
Author's Response: Thanks Brittney! to tell you the truth, i never knew i had it in me either! anyways...good to hear from you! i havent since school got out! just 2.8 more years! lol