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Reviewer: Bein_Fuin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/10/06 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 8: Ghosts from the past

Wow! This is brilliant. Well done indeed. Keep it up! xx

Author's Response: I haven't given up on this story, I just haven't had the time, what with two years of preparing for my french baccalaureat... which will be over in a week, and I feel the urge and inspiraton writing again, and I already have the general lines of my story, so watch out for new chapters coming soon, I hope!

Reviewer: Aralia Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/04/06 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2: Homeless

Why does she suddenly know who everyone is? Why is she not panicking as to where she is? And why would someone ask an unconsious person why they are unconsious, They wouldn't be able to respond. And for the hundreth time, the title "Lady" is for royalty and landowners, not random children.

Reviewer: luv_2_laugh Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/12/05 - 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 7: Early Influences

This is truly interesting!

Reviewer: Alatariel Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/12/05 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 7: Early Influences

I am enjoying this, it's really good! Great job, Keep writing!

Author's Response: I'm taking a long time, I know!

Reviewer: Julri Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/05 - 09:50 pm Title: Prologue: An Innocent Wish

Nice beginning. It's very interesting!

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