I love this chapter, I like how you make Gandalf very wise and Istari-like. And I love the last sentence - "The twilight of peace and dawn of the Darkness." I think that this definitely will get an award for the Flame Awards. :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
It's great! can't wait 2 read the rest.
this isn't AU,right?
Author's Response: I can understand why you think this is AU... It's not supposed to be, but it does kind of look like it. Don't worry, all things will turn back to "normal" at the end. Thanks!
Very original. You are an awesome writer. Keep it on!
Author's Response: Thanks! If you want more there's always "An Age of Innocence" (not finished). 'S about Merry and Pippin if you like Merry and Pippin Chronicles.
I love it, I think it is very creative...Great job, and please update soon! Poor Estel, though, he has to go and find Legolas knowing he should, but not really wanting to...Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank yew, Thank yew... I dedicated the Second Chronicle (A Hidden Path: The Second Chronicle of This I Vow) to you! (It gets exciting... You'll see.)Thanks for being a friend, reviewer, and encourager who I can depend on!
Ah, hi, it's me the author. Yeah, I wont ditch it. Thanks Alatariel for the comments... Very nice, I really was seriously considering of ditching it. I won't now, I think... Well, I wont be up for a while, so please be patient... But I promise you that it will be worth the wait!