Great story, liked the exploration of the bond between the fellowship especially between the youngest and oldest? lovely descriptions and dialogue, glad we dont have such spiders in our world. thanks for sharing x
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I've always like the ways the different characters interact with each other. There aren't many stories featuring Legolas and Pippin, so I wrote this one. I personally think that Gandalf is older than Legolas, but that's just me. Still I understand what you are saying. I'm glad you also liked the imagery and dialogue, which I think is very important in any story. Yeah, our spiders are bad enough. Thanks again.
I liked this one very much - I can just see the hobbits asking lots of questions and testing the others' patience.
What was really good was how you got into Pippin's concerns once Legolas had been hurt on his behalf.
A nice little story. Thanks!
Author's Response: I'm happy that you liked it. It was easy for me to picture the hobbits' curiosity, too, especially where elves were concerned. I'm happy you liked that part. It seemed to me that Pippin would have reacted just that way. Thank you!
Well done! I like that friendship between the eldest (save Gandalf) and the youngest. There's not enough of that nowadays. Too bad really, the seperation of ages. The most immature kids I know only spend time with their immediate age group, while kids who have friends of all ages are so mature!
Cute is a word used to describe a baby! Not a truly touching story. A little unreal, I'm not sure why.
Author's Response: I accept that you did not find the story touching. Fantasy itself is unreal, but the people who like it simply accept that the world being created is real in and of itself. I understand that not everyone will like everything I write. I hope, though, that you will give more of my work a try.
Oh Wow! What a wonderful story showing the friendship between Legolas and Pippin! You put so much feeling, both joyful and anxious, into such a short chapter I was on the edge of my chair!
Well Done! I'm off to see if you've written anything else! : )
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I'm happy you liked the story. I always try hard to do justice, not only to the characters, but also to the emotions that are generated by the plot. I have many stories both long and short. I hope you find some you would like to read. Enjoy.