Date: 31/10/05 - 12:48 pm Title: Part One
What a vivid, desolate scene! It must have been awful, seeing all your kin lying dead on the field while the others held back!
Author's Response: thank you for your feedback. After two years, nearly three, heh, I've updated...:D
Date: 30/10/05 - 10:33 am Title: Prologue
Hauntingly beautiful! You throw such detail in this you'd swear you were right there with her. I like the way you describe how Amrun knows her husband is gone...very dignified but still so heartfelt!
Can't wait to read more of this wonderful story!
Author's Response: thank you for your review...:D