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Reviewer: Jaiden_S Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/04 - 04:56 pm Title: This Side Of Paradise

Just lovely! You did a wonderful job of capturing her anguish. I still think she should have chosen Celegorm over Beren, the Pansi. *grins*

Author's Response: Ahhh, Celegorm...The vicious kidnapper with cheekbones. Of course she should have chosen him Beren!

Author's Response: Hmmm, that "him" was supposed to be striked-(stricken?)-out. [s]him[/s]

Reviewer: DarkLuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/11/04 - 05:36 pm Title: This Side Of Paradise

You overdose on the Passive Voice but the actual content is flowing, vibrant and lovely to read. Luthien seems ethereal in her musings and you breathe life into her as a canon character. I prefer your version to Tolkiens, far less Mary Suey!

Author's Response: Good catch on the passive voice, I really need to stop letting my emotions dominate. I am beyond stunned at the compliments. Not certain that I deserve them but all the same, thank you!

Reviewer: Tathrin Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/04 - 06:57 pm Title: This Side Of Paradise

That was really good. I loved how you kept it elusive until the very end. You can really get a sense of her loss. The way she waits for her death is very sadly beautiful. Nice.

Author's Response: Thank you. I was afraid I wouldn't do it justice. I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Noldo Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/04 - 03:12 pm Title: This Side Of Paradise

Much passion and lovely writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review meant a lot to me.

Reviewer: Adoralyna Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/04 - 06:27 am Title: This Side Of Paradise

Just beautiful darling! There are not enough Luthien stories and yours was very true to the character. MWAH!

Author's Response: You know that your opinion means a lot. The story could use work but I'm glad you liked what there is so far.

Reviewer: oblotr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/08/04 - 05:52 am Title: This Side Of Paradise

God! Excellent! So much power, passion. I am so thrilled that you wrote finally. Write again, please.

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