This is very nice! I don't know why you didn't get positive feedback elsewhere, but I happen to like the variation on how Galadriel's prediction would come to pass. So take heart, I thought it was worth the time to read it.
i would not listen to the flamers! I liked it very much. It was an original idea and a great thought on what Galadriel spoke of. If you listen to what they say, nothing is EVER straight forward. I can easily see this happening! only way i see to make it better might be to add some more details in between their meetings but i think it is better this way!