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Title: Introduction Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed
Interesting. A good beginning, once again I recomend double spacing.
Date: Nov 02 2006 05:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Introduction Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
it was good, your choice of first person was good. However, when Eowyn was "thinking" to herself, obviously, you switched back and forth from present and past tense alot, which can get confusing.
Date: Apr 12 2006 09:16 pm [Report This]
Title: Introduction Reviewer: PhantomsDaughter13 Signed
I love this! Please update!
Date: Mar 30 2006 04:13 pm [Report This]
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