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Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/06 - 10:05 pm Title: Introduction

Interesting. A good beginning, once again I recomend double spacing.

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/04/06 - 01:16 am Title: Introduction

it was good, your choice of first person was good. However, when Eowyn was "thinking" to herself, obviously, you switched back and forth from present and past tense alot, which can get confusing.

Reviewer: PhantomsDaughter13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/03/06 - 09:13 pm Title: Introduction

I love this! Please update!

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