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Title: Introduction Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed
Interesting. A good beginning, once again I recomend double spacing.
Date: 02/11/06 - 05:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Introduction Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
it was good, your choice of first person was good. However, when Eowyn was "thinking" to herself, obviously, you switched back and forth from present and past tense alot, which can get confusing.
Date: 12/04/06 - 09:16 pm [Report This]
Title: Introduction Reviewer: PhantomsDaughter13 Signed
I love this! Please update!
Date: 30/03/06 - 04:13 pm [Report This]
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