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Aw, I love that Galadriel is friends with Draco! Well... Ok, she is realizing he's a jerk, but I am a firm believer that all Draco needed was some nice friends :)
This is a great idea for a story, and I entirely agree that Galadriel would be a Ravenclaw.
As a matter of site protocol, please, please don't use multi-repeated characters as separators. Two or three asterisks, max, please.
I'm sorry but I don't see enough character development here. I know these might be you first chapters but we, the readers, should feel already comfortable and related enough with this reincarnated, adolescent Galadriel of yours, but we are not. We see no traces of her character or personality, nothing that might indicate us that this is indeed, Artanis Nerwen, other than her name.
an why would Draco make acquaintances with a Ravenclaw? I can't see his motivations. Also, it is uncommon for a Ravenclaw to have potions classes along with Gryffindors and Slitherings,
Now this is unique. Love the style you show here. write more soon
Author's Response: I know this is half a year later, but thanks! I appreciate the compliment. :)
heh heh! Great job!
interestining begining!
Uh-oo, I smell trouble...(flash of lighting) Just don't kill her please...on second thought...