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This is one of the best AU stories I have ever read. You should write another one, and yes, you should try to update regularly to not keep your readers in wait for too long. Overall, a great story!
Author's Response: thanks for the review, I'm gla dyou like it. I'll consider writing anothe rAU but for now I just want to get this one done :P. I really hate that I leave it so long, I just get caught up with work and school so much. I'm really sorry, but I'll try to get he next chapter up ASAP. Thanks again
Verry Good! And thank you so so so much for updating! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank-you!!! Please write more soon!!!
Author's Response: You're welcome. Next time I write a story I'll write all of it before posting so I can get it up consistently. I'll try and get the next cha[ter up soon.
A few spelling/grammar mistakes:
In fact Sam if Sam . . .
It is KNEW, not new.
Other than that, you have some interesting plot lines in this story.
Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks, for both the review and the mention of the grammar mistakes. I got them change and I'll replace the chapter.
I love this. Merry is written really well. One small minor thing though. After his very impressive speech, you forgot to close the speechmarks!
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out, I did not ever notice that, sorry about that. I'm glad you like it so far.
Please update! This is very good :) Though I will be angry beyond measure if you kill Merry. He is my favourite...
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you like it. Don't worry, I won't kill Merry or any of the good people, I can barely read stories like that much less write them.