This is one of the best AU stories I have ever read. You should write another one, and yes, you should try to update regularly to not keep your readers in wait for too long. Overall, a great story!
Author's Response: thanks for the review, I'm gla dyou like it. I'll consider writing anothe rAU but for now I just want to get this one done :P. I really hate that I leave it so long, I just get caught up with work and school so much. I'm really sorry, but I'll try to get he next chapter up ASAP. Thanks again
Reviews For The Black Breath
Date: Dec 20 2008 03:00 pm [Report This]
Verry Good! And thank you so so so much for updating! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank-you!!! Please write more soon!!!
Author's Response: You're welcome. Next time I write a story I'll write all of it before posting so I can get it up consistently. I'll try and get the next cha[ter up soon.
Author's Response: You're welcome. Next time I write a story I'll write all of it before posting so I can get it up consistently. I'll try and get the next cha[ter up soon.
Date: Jan 17 2008 07:36 am [Report This]
A few spelling/grammar mistakes:
In fact Sam if Sam . . .
It is KNEW, not new.
Other than that, you have some interesting plot lines in this story.
Keep it up!
NZ
Author's Response: Thanks, for both the review and the mention of the grammar mistakes. I got them change and I'll replace the chapter.
In fact Sam if Sam . . .
It is KNEW, not new.
Other than that, you have some interesting plot lines in this story.
Keep it up!
NZ
Author's Response: Thanks, for both the review and the mention of the grammar mistakes. I got them change and I'll replace the chapter.
Date: Jan 17 2008 07:10 am [Report This]
Awsome. I love the quotes.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked them.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked them.
Date: Jan 16 2008 07:28 pm [Report This]
I like it!
A very interesting might-have-been.
A very interesting might-have-been.
Date: Nov 27 2007 08:43 am [Report This]
I like it so far! Please, please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jan 24 2007 04:33 pm [Report This]
*Dramatic music* Very good, update soon. (Be warned, I have a Balrog)
Date: Jan 06 2007 02:08 pm [Report This]
*Gasps* Ooh, the tension!
Date: Jan 06 2007 02:06 pm [Report This]
I love this. Merry is written really well. One small minor thing though. After his very impressive speech, you forgot to close the speechmarks!
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out, I did not ever notice that, sorry about that. I'm glad you like it so far.
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing that out, I did not ever notice that, sorry about that. I'm glad you like it so far.
Date: Jan 06 2007 02:03 pm [Report This]
I like it. Please write more.
Author's Response: I have updated it if you're still interested in it. Sorry it took so long
Author's Response: I have updated it if you're still interested in it. Sorry it took so long
Date: Nov 14 2006 05:16 pm [Report This]
Please update! This is very good :) Though I will be angry beyond measure if you kill Merry. He is my favourite...
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you like it. Don't worry, I won't kill Merry or any of the good people, I can barely read stories like that much less write them.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad that you like it. Don't worry, I won't kill Merry or any of the good people, I can barely read stories like that much less write them.
Date: Feb 27 2006 01:50 pm [Report This]