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Reviewer: Dark_Elf Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/06 - 01:36 am Title: the first and the sequel

Well, it's good, but could you put some spaces every now and then, and seperate them into paragraphs? I mean, don't get me wrong, it's pretty good, but it's a bit complicated to read.

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