Luved the story! Do you think you could maybe write a one-shot happy-ending sequel to it? WEll, anyways, I loved the story!

:D Perfect!

Now, before you think I chickened out from your response, I'll just have to say that I simply forgot what your story was called. Sorry. (Although I doubt you have eagerly awaited my reply.) I suppose we must have seen different movies, because it was my impression that they were based on the books. If you use canon Movieverse, I'm a bit curious as to where you got the name Thranduil, the place Mirkwood, and the word Ada. But I digress. Second, even though they may act as old as they want, I doubt that a prince of Mirkwood would act like a spoiled brat. Despite Thranduils best efforts, this wasn't the safest place to grow up. Thirdly, you say that this is fiction. Wrong. It's FANfiction, meaning based on another person's work. By saying that because it's fiction, you can write what you want, you're disrespecting Tolkien's work. Concrit? Fine. Your language is good, although the dialogue doesn't always ring true by ME standards. But your portrayal of the characters is so far off that it seriously sours the experience. And since you follow Movieverse canon, I have to say that your OC's thoughts of Arwen are rather strange, unless Arwen seriously changes to the time when she outrides the ringwraits. Incidentally, your OC is annoying. I think that as a writer, you have a great deal of potential. But you tend to take the easy way out, in bastardizing Thranduil as a plot device, and writing the characters as an approximate to human teenagers. They're not. They're elves, from a harsh time (especially in Mirkwood), and supposed to be the wisest (mark that one) and fairest of all. Also, since the movies actually states how the orcs came to be, and it's a tragic story indeed, it's incredibly callous and rude of Aranel to use it as an insult. And lastly, you seem to have a rather strange definition of the word canon. It means what you can learn based on the source material, be it the movies or the books. I'll take care to be accurate about Movieverse canon and Book canon in the future.

I loved this! I love the ending! I always like a happy ending!

girlllll woww just make that question wow i dont know what to say less i want moreee

I'm with her ^^ This is lovely. I really want to read more ...you know, soon lol

Wha...what? He *gulp* shot Aranel? I'm waiting, Jenni. Please, don't make me wait too long.

i think this is going to be hard and slowww i love it girl but i didint espect the kiss end this way:( hope to read more cuz i hvee every word of it

well i think i´m the only one who review this story but i love it i think u find a way to resolve the problem with Aragorn girl thx so much for writing it