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Reviewer: LijLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/10/04 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1. Getting to know “Him”.

"Is her name "Angel" on "Angle"? What's a "bar"? That would be a "bra", no?Also, I have never heard of an "Hour of Sing". I'm a bit confused on that one. "Wooden steal (would that be "steel" by any chance?) handle" is a little odd. It's either made from wood or steel. Which one is it? It's not "Los Angels" but "Los Angeles". Petty little mistakes like these make your stories impossible to read. If you need a beta, please e-mail me. Contrary to the popular belief I don't bite. " well she has lots of nicknames so it can be either one. but I have tried to fix them but can't sorry.

Reviewer: Anais Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/04 - 12:42 am Title: Chapter 1. Getting to know “Him”.

Is her name "Angel" on "Angle"?
What's a "bar"? That would be a "bra", no?Also, I have never heard of an "Hour of Sing". I'm a bit confused on that one.
"Wooden steal (would that be "steel" by any chance?) handle" is a little odd. It's either made from wood or steel. Which one is it?
It's not "Los Angels" but "Los Angeles".
Petty little mistakes like these make your stories impossible to read. If you need a beta, please e-mail me. Contrary to the popular belief I don't bite.

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