Over all fairly well written, I am partial to fic written of Rohan though I found two aspects of the story slightly confusing. Firstly it made mention of Theodreds mother, the Queen though Theodens wife died giving birth to there first and only son, which brings me to the second aspect I found confusing which is "Elfwine" since Theodred did not have a brother. In earlier works of Lord of the Rings, Theoden did have a daughter named Idis but she was written out becuase her role was completely over shadowed by Eowyn.

Overall, not too badly done but those are just some facts you may want to keep in mind for the next time :)