Are you aware of just how evil you are? Well, let me tell you. You just left it there. And that, my friend, is evil.
Nah, it was superb, again. Although, I do think your a little bit evil. What with the stabbing in the gut and all.
Author's Response: lol
humm, I don't kno what to think on Boromir...
I like Boromir, but the codes?
Did he really write them.
Who is the mole so i may maim them?
Author's Response: Well, Boromir did not write them, they were already in place at the time he was Captain. It is fairly common for agencies to update their protocols, though. Did it strike you as unrealistic or not credible? If it did I'm sure I can fix that, lol. As for the mole, you'll get your chance, at some point. ;)
Very good. I too, thought that Faramir would make it.. but I suppose you must throw that in there somehow. Shelley was very funny... made me laugh. As for the emotion, I think you did pretty well summing it up. I like the way you detailed it.
Author's Response: ty again, jjers :D well...I contemplated having them survive, but you need *some* badness, I should think, lol. wheee *runs off again*
Not a bad chapter at all. I liked the Shelley part, it was cute... but *sniff, sniff* why did they have to die? The were lied to! oh, well... life is rather depressing most of the time. Keep writing so that I don't have to wait too long to find out whats about Boromir! =) Please be as fast as you can! ;D
Author's Response: teehee, thanks =) I think I should have the next chapter up sometime later this week...
ARGH! I thought that Faramir would make it! Well, I like the contention between the female prisoners and faramir, and I LOVE the jealousy/snootyness of Eowyn...which reminds me...WHY in ARDA do you call her ...owyn? It drives me MAD!
Author's Response: gah, I am trying to fix that. lol. stupid accents apparently don't show up in some skins... -_- I think I'll just take them out. lol. ty for reviewinggg.