Wow, you've put a lot of work into this. Great job, mellon nin! sorry I haven't emailed you for so long... Please write more and update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! (darkly) You'll be seeing so many new stories I won't be able to keep track... lol... (returns to normal voice Geez, my fingers are so tired... I wrote about five chapters of stuff and gave all my old stories a new format... It's cleaner, but by the Valar, my fingers are sore!
This is a brilliant depiction, of the Elf's viewpoint, and it really adds to the feeling, that you added the Elvish lament for Mithrandir. One error, though: I thought that Balin was Gimli's cousin.
Author's Response: Yes, you're right. Balin is Gimli's cousin. I read 'Fellowship of the Ring' about five months ago, and I kind of forgot. Yeah. I'm not that good with Dwarven history. :D
Thanks! More chapters are ahead.
Author's Response: I fixed the "cousin/uncle" error as well. Thanks for pointing that out!
This is a beautiful character sketch of the feelings of a certain ranger. It is my belief, that this could not have been better done, with the exception of a few spelling errors.
Author's Response: Spelling errors? *sighs* I knew I should have gone through that SpellChecker. Well, thanks for the review!