Nice, creepy (yes, this is supposed to be meant as a compliment in this case) ending! Are you going to write a sequel?
And also: I'm confused about the creature. Is it Gollum or some other fouler, older thing?
Author's Response: It's not even FINISHED yet! Now is not the time to think about a sequel!
Author's Response: And no, it's not Gollum, hence the titles: Older and Fouler Things. I have all of it thus far written on paper, I simply have to type it up.
the review went in twice..
my computer must be really fucked..
i just clicked the back arrow and it happened...
Author's Response: Oook, try to keep the language on the reviews to a minimum, please, thank you.