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Reviewer: Daewen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/09 - 06:54 pm Title: The Call of the Sea

I absolutely love this. It's so sad and elflike.

Reviewer: SilverGrace Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/06 - 12:58 am Title: The Call of the Sea

Wow! That has to be one of the best poems that I have ever read!
Awesome job!

P.S. I loved how you put a little Elvish in your poem. :)

Reviewer: shmo Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/04/06 - 11:10 pm Title: The Call of the Sea

This is beautiful!
While I was reading it, I heard it as a chant. It also has a similar rhythm/feel as many of the poems in Elvish. Nice work!
oh, and thanks for the review :)

Author's Response: You are most welcome! =) Thank you for reviewing. I was not as really certain how it was to be spoken, or anything like that, but I felt like writing it, and I was moved, in a way.

Reviewer: TinuvielGreenleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/04/06 - 04:12 am Title: The Call of the Sea

WOW! That's really awesome! Hey, are you on I think I've heard that name on there before... this is really good! Great work!


Author's Response: No, this is the only site that I post on. Thank you for the review, though!

Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/06 - 02:33 am Title: The Call of the Sea

Lovely! You really should write more poems, Kalen.

Author's Response: I will post more of them. I already write a great many. Thank you for the lovely review, AN. I wrote one about the mirror of Galadriel...but I haven't as yet, posted it.

Reviewer: bodobodot1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/06 - 10:19 pm Title: The Call of the Sea

It sounds like something that Aragorn might say to himself for no apparent reason. I would have used a different first verse, although I especially love the ending. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: the_leaky_pen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/06 - 12:48 am Title: The Call of the Sea

This is a lovely poem. There are some spelling errors that disrupted my reading of it, but nevertheless it evokes perfectly the longing of the Fair Folk for the Sea.

Author's Response: I am sorry for any spelling errors, i do not have the luxury of a spell-check programme.

Reviewer: Syril Silverleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/04/06 - 11:45 pm Title: The Call of the Sea

I love poetry and I liked this. I've never read anything here like it before. Good job!

Author's Response: Why thank you.

Reviewer: FeanorsStar Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/06 - 07:45 pm Title: The Call of the Sea

so sad and powerful, yet hopeful. I love it, especially the elvish at the end.

Author's Response: Well, thank you. I am most pleased that you enjoyed it, mellon.

Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/06 - 03:00 am Title: The Call of the Sea

that was so sweet and sad at the same time!

Author's Response: Why, thank you, XoGiggles!

Reviewer: PhantomsDaughter13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/06 - 12:06 am Title: The Call of the Sea

Hey Princess Kalen! I love this! Have u read the new chapter I added to my story Through My Eyes? If not, can you read it & tell me what u think? Keep writing!

Author's Response: Yes, I did read it. I am quite glad that you chose to add to it!

Reviewer: tinara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/04/06 - 09:27 pm Title: The Call of the Sea

Hi! I just read in the forum that noone reviews your stories. As I don´t have much time I thought: A poem, that´s fine, not too long and it reminds me of the end of the film RoTK, I guess it even goes together with the film music. I like it very much! Tinara

Author's Response: Thank you. I saw a picture yesterday, non-lotr, that inspired me to do this. And thank you for reviewing! It means a lot to me, especially now that the counter is gone.

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