this chapter is one of my favs... It reveals the personalities of the characters, dramatizing them a little...
Elijah: "I want to win the money so that I can buy a better stereo."
Probes: "Don't you already have the best one in the world?"
Elijah: "Duh! That's the POINT, dude! I want to PAY them to MAKE me a better one!"
Sounds like one of my cousins. He's not spoiled or anything, but he's just... like Elijah...
Sarah: "All this hay is ruining my manicure!" That was funny... It reminds me of one girl I know...
Jeff Probes smirked to himself, as he held the airhorn into one of the tents on Team Sindarin's campsite.
Probes: "3, 2, 1..."
(Airhorn blows loudly.)
Viggo: "WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!?"
A large, masculine arm reached out of the tent, and grabbed Probes by the throat.
Probes: "No violence!"
Viggo: (muttering) "No blowing a damn airhorn in my tent at...(shouting) 5:00 AM, ARE YOU INSANE?" Yup. Probes is insane...
I just started reading it... Oh by Lord, I wish I could see it on TV right now...
I know! Let's get a rabid chicken to follow them!
Elijah: (nervously) Rabid chicken? I don't want a rabid chicken!
Viggo: Rabid chickens don't randomly just appear... (glares at Probe)
Orlando: A rabid chicken. Just what we need.
Billy: I know! Let's roast it! It'll be really good.
Dom: I think you got the role as Pippin because you are like Pippin. Idiotic!
Author's Response: YAY! A REVIEWER WHO IS SERIOUS! AND ONE WHO LIKES MY WORK!
thanks for updating
ooh and i'm still voting for Team Sindarin
Author's Response: Damn it! READ THE LITTLE NOTE AT THE END! Please vote for ONE character from EACH team for me to vote off the island. Thank you for participating!
ok! well, then, for Sindarin, Laurence! (I really dont know why. It just won't be fun without the others!)
Author's Response: Yay! Hannon le! If you had not said that, I would have had no choice but to get rid of Orlando, if team Sindarin loses the immunity challenge...but we'll get to that when we come to it.
i am reading your fanfic and you know? it's not bad.. not bad at all!
though there is alot of characters and names so it's gonna be confusing for me but eh...
GO TEAM...erm..ooh..umm..damn it i got my favorite characters on both teams...
what would Orlando do..
GO TEAM SINDARIN!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!