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Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: aniron Signed
I think that David Wenham shouldnt be made fun of as much, by calling him Daisy.
Well, as for the voting off, I think it should be Sala and Karl.
Good luck, and I hope to read more soon!
Date: 04/18/07 02:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Three Reviewer: the ring destroyer Signed
hahahah *faints* (wakes up, looks at scrren) *faints again* it was sooo funny! loved it! 10/10
Date: 10/15/06 02:23 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Three Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed
*falls to the ground laughing* GREAT STORY! PLZ, PLZ UPDATE SOON! *goes unconscious from laughing*

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter right now. Okay now breathe!
Date: 10/14/06 05:45 pm [Report This]
Title: UPDATE!!! Reviewer: bodobodot1 Signed
This is hilarious. HAHA
Date: 07/17/06 07:33 pm [Report This]
Title: UPDATE!!! Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
I agree with our Imradris_Elf here; you should write out the course of events and the reactions of the others. (And Bernard... Hee hee..)
Date: 04/19/06 10:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Four Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
this chapter is one of my favs... It reveals the personalities of the characters, dramatizing them a little...

Elijah: "I want to win the money so that I can buy a better stereo."

Probes: "Don't you already have the best one in the world?"

Elijah: "Duh! That's the POINT, dude! I want to PAY them to MAKE me a better one!"


Sounds like one of my cousins. He's not spoiled or anything, but he's just... like Elijah...

:D
Date: 04/19/06 10:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Three Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
Fruitloops?

Sarah: "All this hay is ruining my manicure!" That was funny... It reminds me of one girl I know...

Jeff Probes smirked to himself, as he held the airhorn into one of the tents on Team Sindarin's campsite.

Probes: "3, 2, 1..."

(Airhorn blows loudly.)

Viggo: "WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!?"

A large, masculine arm reached out of the tent, and grabbed Probes by the throat.

Probes: "No violence!"

Viggo: (muttering) "No blowing a damn airhorn in my tent at...(shouting) 5:00 AM, ARE YOU INSANE?"
Yup. Probes is insane...
Date: 04/19/06 10:26 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1: Part Two Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
One comment: This chapter seems to go from drama to normal punctuation, switching on and off. Stick to one thing. Other than that, it was hilarious.
Date: 04/19/06 10:25 pm [Report This]
Title: UPDATE!!! Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
lol...
but will people wipe their asses now?
lol

Author's Response: One can only HOPE...
Date: 04/12/06 03:25 pm [Report This]
Title: UPDATE!!! Reviewer: Imradris_Elf Signed
Maybe you could write about the others' reactions to this?

Author's Response: I am going to do that, but I was somewhat pressed for time, and I had to get off the computer last night.
Date: 04/12/06 07:39 am [Report This]
Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
oh yeah..
forgot to vte..
i'll vote for that guy that plays King Theoden
XD

Author's Response: thanks, Giggles
Date: 04/10/06 05:37 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
I kind of already voted: Laurence and Bernard... I think...
Date: 04/10/06 05:22 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Five Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
lol...
is there going to be aa challange?
O_o
nobody is getting kicked off..
XD
Date: 04/10/06 04:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Another note Reviewer: Imradris_Elf Signed
I just started reading it... Oh by Lord, I wish I could see it on TV right now...

I know! Let's get a rabid chicken to follow them!

Elijah: (nervously) Rabid chicken? I don't want a rabid chicken!

Viggo: Rabid chickens don't randomly just appear... (glares at Probe)

Orlando: A rabid chicken. Just what we need.

Billy: I know! Let's roast it! It'll be really good.

Liv: Ewww...

Dom: I think you got the role as Pippin because you are like Pippin. Idiotic!



Author's Response: YAY! A REVIEWER WHO IS SERIOUS! AND ONE WHO LIKES MY WORK!
Date: 04/09/06 05:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Just a note. Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
What?! Continue, please!

Author's Response: I will, now, don't worry.
Date: 04/07/06 06:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Two Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
yay!
hey kalen..
XD
thanks for updating
ooh and i'm still voting for Team Sindarin
=D

Author's Response: Damn it! READ THE LITTLE NOTE AT THE END! Please vote for ONE character from EACH team for me to vote off the island. Thank you for participating!
Date: 04/05/06 03:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
ok! well, then, for Sindarin, Laurence! (I really dont know why. It just won't be fun without the others!)

Author's Response: Yay! Hannon le! If you had not said that, I would have had no choice but to get rid of Orlando, if team Sindarin loses the immunity challenge...but we'll get to that when we come to it.
Date: 04/04/06 08:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Two Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
Orlando! Just kidding... Um... Bernard?

Author's Response: one for each team please!
Date: 04/04/06 08:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1: Part Two Reviewer: PhantomsDaughter13 Signed
Update soon! thanx!

Author's Response: I will. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 04/03/06 05:46 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1: Part Two Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
hi!
hullo..
i am reading your fanfic and you know? it's not bad.. not bad at all!
though there is alot of characters and names so it's gonna be confusing for me but eh...
oh yeah..
GO TEAM...erm..ooh..umm..damn it i got my favorite characters on both teams...
what would Orlando do..
GO TEAM SINDARIN!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 04/03/06 04:47 pm [Report This]
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