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Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: aniron Signed
I think that David Wenham shouldnt be made fun of as much, by calling him Daisy.
Well, as for the voting off, I think it should be Sala and Karl.
Good luck, and I hope to read more soon!
Date: Apr 18 2007 02:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Three Reviewer: the ring destroyer Signed
hahahah *faints* (wakes up, looks at scrren) *faints again* it was sooo funny! loved it! 10/10
Date: Oct 15 2006 02:23 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Three Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed
*falls to the ground laughing* GREAT STORY! PLZ, PLZ UPDATE SOON! *goes unconscious from laughing*

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next chapter right now. Okay now breathe!
Date: Oct 14 2006 05:45 pm [Report This]
Title: UPDATE!!! Reviewer: bodobodot1 Signed
This is hilarious. HAHA
Date: Jul 17 2006 07:33 pm [Report This]
Title: UPDATE!!! Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
I agree with our Imradris_Elf here; you should write out the course of events and the reactions of the others. (And Bernard... Hee hee..)
Date: Apr 19 2006 10:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Four Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
this chapter is one of my favs... It reveals the personalities of the characters, dramatizing them a little...

Elijah: "I want to win the money so that I can buy a better stereo."

Probes: "Don't you already have the best one in the world?"

Elijah: "Duh! That's the POINT, dude! I want to PAY them to MAKE me a better one!"


Sounds like one of my cousins. He's not spoiled or anything, but he's just... like Elijah...

:D
Date: Apr 19 2006 10:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Three Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
Fruitloops?

Sarah: "All this hay is ruining my manicure!" That was funny... It reminds me of one girl I know...

Jeff Probes smirked to himself, as he held the airhorn into one of the tents on Team Sindarin's campsite.

Probes: "3, 2, 1..."

(Airhorn blows loudly.)

Viggo: "WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!?"

A large, masculine arm reached out of the tent, and grabbed Probes by the throat.

Probes: "No violence!"

Viggo: (muttering) "No blowing a damn airhorn in my tent at...(shouting) 5:00 AM, ARE YOU INSANE?"
Yup. Probes is insane...
Date: Apr 19 2006 10:26 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1: Part Two Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
One comment: This chapter seems to go from drama to normal punctuation, switching on and off. Stick to one thing. Other than that, it was hilarious.
Date: Apr 19 2006 10:25 pm [Report This]
Title: UPDATE!!! Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
lol...
but will people wipe their asses now?
lol

Author's Response: One can only HOPE...
Date: Apr 12 2006 03:25 pm [Report This]
Title: UPDATE!!! Reviewer: Imradris_Elf Signed
Maybe you could write about the others' reactions to this?

Author's Response: I am going to do that, but I was somewhat pressed for time, and I had to get off the computer last night.
Date: Apr 12 2006 07:39 am [Report This]
Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
oh yeah..
forgot to vte..
i'll vote for that guy that plays King Theoden
XD

Author's Response: thanks, Giggles
Date: Apr 10 2006 05:37 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
I kind of already voted: Laurence and Bernard... I think...
Date: Apr 10 2006 05:22 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Five Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
lol...
is there going to be aa challange?
O_o
nobody is getting kicked off..
XD
Date: Apr 10 2006 04:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Another note Reviewer: Imradris_Elf Signed
I just started reading it... Oh by Lord, I wish I could see it on TV right now...

I know! Let's get a rabid chicken to follow them!

Elijah: (nervously) Rabid chicken? I don't want a rabid chicken!

Viggo: Rabid chickens don't randomly just appear... (glares at Probe)

Orlando: A rabid chicken. Just what we need.

Billy: I know! Let's roast it! It'll be really good.

Liv: Ewww...

Dom: I think you got the role as Pippin because you are like Pippin. Idiotic!



Author's Response: YAY! A REVIEWER WHO IS SERIOUS! AND ONE WHO LIKES MY WORK!
Date: Apr 09 2006 05:01 pm [Report This]
Title: Just a note. Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
What?! Continue, please!

Author's Response: I will, now, don't worry.
Date: Apr 07 2006 06:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Two Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
yay!
hey kalen..
XD
thanks for updating
ooh and i'm still voting for Team Sindarin
=D

Author's Response: Damn it! READ THE LITTLE NOTE AT THE END! Please vote for ONE character from EACH team for me to vote off the island. Thank you for participating!
Date: Apr 05 2006 03:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
ok! well, then, for Sindarin, Laurence! (I really dont know why. It just won't be fun without the others!)

Author's Response: Yay! Hannon le! If you had not said that, I would have had no choice but to get rid of Orlando, if team Sindarin loses the immunity challenge...but we'll get to that when we come to it.
Date: Apr 04 2006 08:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode Two Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
Orlando! Just kidding... Um... Bernard?

Author's Response: one for each team please!
Date: Apr 04 2006 08:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1: Part Two Reviewer: PhantomsDaughter13 Signed
Update soon! thanx!

Author's Response: I will. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: Apr 03 2006 05:46 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1: Part Two Reviewer: XoGiggles Signed
hi!
hullo..
i am reading your fanfic and you know? it's not bad.. not bad at all!
though there is alot of characters and names so it's gonna be confusing for me but eh...
oh yeah..
GO TEAM...erm..ooh..umm..damn it i got my favorite characters on both teams...
what would Orlando do..
GO TEAM SINDARIN!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Date: Apr 03 2006 04:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Episode 1 Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
Good start, Princess Kalen! This is going to be interesting... Very interesting... *manical laughter* Erm, sorry. Late night reviews tend to leave me a bit unorganized. Well, anyway, nice start.

Author's Response: That's quite all right.
Date: Apr 01 2006 10:40 pm [Report This]
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