This is SooO awesome! I mean this is really really good. GOD I HATE DEREK! Just a wee suggestion, I'd put asterisks on the F word, since it's PG13. But not a big deal. This is like AWESOME! Unless you're done, I would write more ASAP!
Author's Response: Oh heavens no, not done yet! And a good suggestion, I'll definitely take that into consideration. I do apologize for the delay, having a major writer's block but will try to have more.
wow poor jen its a good thing orli has the touch to soothe a tortured soul.i mean she was raped for christ sake i can't imagine how horrible that had to be for her and right after her fight well i for one am just glad she and thier baby are alright.their BABY my god they're having a baby i'm glad at least that its theirs cause if it was dereks i don't know how orlando could cope with that.well i'm glad you updated i love it and am looking forward to the rest
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, it took me a little while to get over a writer's block because I really don't like writing fight sequences between Orlando and the other character; especially if they're as involved with each other as Jennie and Orlando are. I promise I'll have more soon and some juicy secrets are soon to be revealed.
finish please i need to know are you even planing on finishing
Author's Response: Yes I am and I've actually written ahead a bit but I'm a bit stuck on this one chapter. But once I get through that, I'll have at least THREE more chapters for you!
I have just gotten the chance to really look at this story. It seems really interesting, though I think I would call Jennie more neurotic than levelheaded. *laugh*
I'm not usually not that into real person fics unless they are Viggo/Orlando slash, but this one has potential.
gaah! this is bloody fantastic! hafta admit that when I saw the summary i was skeptical but this was really good! and if you don't post up the next chapter soon i might cry :'( lol jk ;-) ~luv always* meg aka dramaqueen