You must, must update! I'm desperate to know what happens! x
woah! what an excellent story! keep it up! I eagerly await to read the next chapter. xxx
Gadzooks but Merry's gone off the deep end! Let me guess what's coming in the next chapter: it's Pippin's turn to be punished for running off into the woods. But wait... what happened to the Nazgul? Isn't it about time for them to show up? What's holding them off? Saruman?
Oh boy, Pippin's in a sort of bad spot. On the one hand, he wants to help Frodo, while on the other, he wants to do what Merry says. I like it how you put it through Pip's perspective.
Merry's not acting himself though, suppose that's what got Pippin in such a spot.
Author's Response: things will get pretty dark for poor Pip before the end. thanks for writing!
I've read this on stories of arda, but only bits and pieces. I am reading its sequal, but I haven't reviewed on it quite yet. This is an awsome story! Keep coming with them!
Author's Response: thank you! I have lots of help from Ariel and CelandineG and Aratlithial. I can't believe I've been writing this for 3 years. Glad you like it so far.
This is seriously sinister! A very good read. I look forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: thank you! and your pen name is actually a character name in the original novel I'm writing (minus the 'i'). Cool.