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Title: Chapter 12 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
This is awesome! I do hope you add soon.

Author's Response: THANX! I'll try to put up more soon! thanx for the review!
Date: Jul 18 2006 05:58 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
I liked this chapter a lot, my favorite thing (the thing that was most powerful in terms of character emotion) was talking about how the hunters reminded Aragorn of the old Strider. I always thought he'd miss his life to some degree, and it gives him something to hold on to.

Also, sorry if I was somewhat harsh and snappish in the other reviews, I was just in a really pissed mood that day and...yeah. lol. ;)

Author's Response: it was no problem, really, it made me go back over every thing and change and fix a lot of things. I wanted to make Aragorn more a part of this story and hopefully i can do that. Thanx for the reviews!
Date: Jul 17 2006 09:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed might want to make the setting of this new scene a bit more specific. It really isn't good to jump in in the middle of a conversation, as I have no clue what is going on. Hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: okaay *runs off to do that*
Date: Jul 16 2006 10:00 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Gah, why doesn't she just tell Aragorn about Raleon?

Author's Response: I believe it's a matter of pride.
Date: Jul 16 2006 09:58 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
I thought everyone except Naru, her grandmother, and a little boy died. How did Loel survive? Other than that, it was good.

Author's Response: All members of the immediate royal family died, and the extended family that was present at the castle.
Date: Jul 16 2006 09:56 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
This does not make sense: "Her grandmother was staringn at a man who had to be at least ten years older, with a stately air about and a polished teak cane in hand as he walked proudly through the courtyard. "I have to go, Damun.I think I have to sleep."

All the respnes Naru got was a distracted, "Of course, dear," before she left her grandmother to her staring."

Is Naru saying "I have to go, Damun"? or is the grandmother? Because it doesn't really make sense for her to say she has to go to sleep when she then walks out into the garden. Also, she would not say Valar. Because she opposes (or opposed) Gondor, that means she was essentially opposing the Elendili, the Faithful Ones, who followed the Valar. Those who opposed the Elendili did so because Sauron poisoned their thoughts into thinking the Valar were holding them captive in Numenor. So...yeah, she would not use Valar that way.

Author's Response: I am currently trying to find something that she would swear by, but for now it's just fate that she could blame.
Date: Jul 16 2006 09:52 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Raleon is a real dumb guy, :P. I think Naru should just punch him. And a more proper word would be "womanizing" rather than "vandalizing".

Author's Response: Thank you! I've fixed alto of things in this so far!
Date: Jul 16 2006 09:47 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
This was good, a delicious conflict ending to the chapter. However, this one sentence makes no sense: "Naru, in quite a good mood, if she did say so herself, but all that abruptly fled when she saw what sat beside The King." You should say "Naru was in quite a good mood, if she did say so herself, but all that abruptly fled when she saw what sat beside The King."

Author's Response: Thanx!
Date: Jul 16 2006 09:43 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
Well, Raleon considers himself quite the ladies' man, does he? Somehow I don't think Naru is just going to give in to him. lol.

Author's Response: Do you, now? Well. So do I. :D
Date: Jul 16 2006 09:38 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
I am extremely confused. The scene with Dami and Aragorn mentioned a Lord Faulk, though he never said a word in the scene. Some of the dialogue also made no sense at all. And what exactly is the cliffhanger in this chapter? I don't understand.

Author's Response: I'll try to fix this, Thanx for your opinion!
Date: Jul 16 2006 09:31 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
I enjoy this fic a lot, your details have a good way of entertaining the reader, but something that would add even more to it would be spelling. There were 64 typos in this chapter alone, and none of them were particularly complicated words.

Author's Response: Sorry. *cringes* i have no word on this computer and haven't got internet on mine. I will go try to fix them.
Date: Jul 15 2006 02:55 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
naru is really interesting, I like her.

Author's Response: *grins* I tried.
Date: Jul 15 2006 02:46 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Nieriel Signed
A very intriguing beginning, and I shall continue. You draw the reader's attention in and keep it successfully.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: Jul 15 2006 02:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
hey! great story! a bit hard to follow with spelling errors, some words have the right letters but not in the right order. other than that, keep on writing!

Author's Response: sorry, no spell check. I try to fix them later but spell is NOT my strong suit. Thank you for the review.
Date: Jun 16 2006 05:09 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
A few spellimg errors, but nothing spellcheck can't find.
"Men!"- Had me laughing so hard!
I will await the next chapter with enthoseism.
But why would The King come, personaly, to hear their report? Like, the guy IS the king of ONLY HALF of Middle-Earth. :)

Author's Response: Sorry about the spelling crap. i'm horrid at it and my mom doesn't have Word on her computer, so i'm stuck with plain old Notepad. I try to go over things later to check most of it and i haven't done so for the last few chapters, forgive,plez. And to answer your question (serious or not?) Aragorn has only a few Bandit Catchers. Why wouldn't he meet with them persoanaly? He's a very hands-on kind of guy, don't you think? But Aragorn may sometimes push their reports off on underlings if they're written but he like to hear them in person if he can. Our King has something special in mind for our Two hunters. =)
Date: Jun 08 2006 04:50 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Despite myself, I kinda like Raleon. Keep it comeing!

Author's Response: So so I. Thanx for reviewing!

Author's Response: *do
Date: Jun 05 2006 08:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
aarrggghh! Yes, I DO mind the cliffhanger! Where do you live? Tell me so that I might find you and put penicls between all your toes!

:) Just kidding, the cliffhanger isn't that bad. I suppose I can live til you update, but, please, let that be soon!

Author's Response: *locks door and looks out blinds* I'll update as soonas possible. I promise ^__^
Date: May 11 2006 08:08 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Syril Silverleaf Signed
sorry about some of the plot bugs I'l try to fix them later.
Date: Apr 18 2006 08:36 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Syril Silverleaf Signed
Date: Apr 17 2006 05:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Alatariel Ancalimon Signed
hehehe bandit catcher. i like that, this looks like a cool story! keep writin! :)

Author's Response: Thanx. I thought that making her fight and track down some of her father's friends would be fun.
Date: Apr 12 2006 05:15 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: lindahoyland Anonymous
This is an interesting idea which has caught my interest. You have a few typos but nothing major.I shall be interested to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for saying that! I love all review but feedback like that isn't found a whole lot. I'll try to edit al the typos out. Thanx! :)
Date: Apr 11 2006 10:30 pm [Report This]
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