Reviews For True Hero
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Princess Kalen Signed
This was brilliant! I enjoyed this poem, and i think that you should write more...Now go read mine...
Date: Apr 23 2006 02:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Kim Signed
That was so beautiful! I hope you continue to write poetry as you are really good at it.
Date: Apr 17 2006 12:12 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: LadyofLight Signed
...Wow. I've tried to write poetry, and it usually comes out sounding like a bad Madonna song. This is really, really good work.

Just one question, though. Whose horse is it?

Author's Response: No named character's. Just one of the many Rohirim warriors at Pelanor Fields. Should I name the horse, and/or rider?
Date: Apr 15 2006 10:03 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed
This was lovely, shmo. You have the true soul of a poet inside you!

Author's Response: Thank you, Alatarial N. It is...a passion.
Date: Apr 14 2006 08:56 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elariel Erestorion Signed
This is a beautiful peace of work.

My only critisism would be that a couple of the lines are a little awkward. They seem to interupt the flow of the poem.

The three lines I found that really did this were lines 4, 6 and 9.

Other then that this is truly a beautiful piece of writting.

Author's Response: thanks so much for the review. I'll take a look at those lines.
Date: Apr 13 2006 08:26 pm [Report This]
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