Reviews For True Hero
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Reviewer: Princess Kalen Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/04/06 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was brilliant! I enjoyed this poem, and i think that you should write more...Now go read mine...

Reviewer: Kim Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/04/06 - 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was so beautiful! I hope you continue to write poetry as you are really good at it.

Reviewer: LadyofLight Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/06 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1

...Wow. I've tried to write poetry, and it usually comes out sounding like a bad Madonna song. This is really, really good work.

Just one question, though. Whose horse is it?

Author's Response: No named character's. Just one of the many Rohirim warriors at Pelanor Fields. Should I name the horse, and/or rider?

Reviewer: Alatariel Narmolanya Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/04/06 - 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was lovely, shmo. You have the true soul of a poet inside you!

Author's Response: Thank you, Alatarial N. It is...a passion.

Reviewer: Elariel Erestorion Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/04/06 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a beautiful peace of work.

My only critisism would be that a couple of the lines are a little awkward. They seem to interupt the flow of the poem.

The three lines I found that really did this were lines 4, 6 and 9.

Other then that this is truly a beautiful piece of writting.



Author's Response: thanks so much for the review. I'll take a look at those lines.

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