...Wow. I've tried to write poetry, and it usually comes out sounding like a bad Madonna song. This is really, really good work.
Just one question, though. Whose horse is it?
Author's Response: No named character's. Just one of the many Rohirim warriors at Pelanor Fields. Should I name the horse, and/or rider?
This is a beautiful peace of work.
My only critisism would be that a couple of the lines are a little awkward. They seem to interupt the flow of the poem.
The three lines I found that really did this were lines 4, 6 and 9.
Other then that this is truly a beautiful piece of writting.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the review. I'll take a look at those lines.