The way you named Pippin, Soldier, makes this like a parable, like Pilgim's Progress.
You do leave a few ends here and there, but they could be tied up easy.
Author's Response: Thanks Wyn! Goodness, compared with the classics! lol.
Who would of thought of the outcome if Pippin had not been apart of the Fellowhship. This was a very dark, AU way to start my morning, lol. Good work.
Author's Response: Thanks Dark Elf! Well, we know who would've thought, huh, it's gythia of the wyrd mind... hee hee hee.
A very dark AU story, indeed. It was very angsty, and while the possiblities are a little scary to think of, it was magnificent. I think more people will appreciate Pip being in the Fellowship after they read the story...
Awesome job, gythia!
Author's Response: thanks so much! It is so exciting to find my story has been reviewed so soon after posting it, you must be a speed-reader. Wheee, my obsessive writing pays off!