A bit graphic perhaps, but different. I like the end :-) That was a really nice twist. I don't think many people have thought or wanted to think about what would have happened if the Fellowship had not been successful. There was a few spelling mistakes ("sorwd" is spelt "sword") but points for being original.
Author's Response: um yeah i saw the spelling mistakes. i know it was spelt wrong but when i was checking it i clicked add instead of change. thanks